In the same way, the introduction should be interesting.
The second title is engaging because it is specific, relatable, and tells the reader about the value contained in the essay that follows.
Make your title and introduction specific and think about how you can say them in an interesting way that shows the reader your essay has value.
This part of your essay can include volunteer work, extracurricular activities, and any other efforts you feel tie in well with the goals of the organization offering the scholarship.
Making the connection between your accomplishments and the donor’s efforts will help to show why you are an excellent candidate.